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Rob Carson
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carlisle
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Posted - 25/06/2017 :  18:04:49  Show Profile Send Rob Carson a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Always an enjoyable surprise after reading a poem to find it was written as an acrostic. Tendrils of bro'...umbrels of pignut made me search for their meaning and a picture of pignut, which, I've never heard of. I especially liked the description of the bluebells exuding an aura of calmness. All these allusions firmly established the unique locus of the poem. The oasis of green, an oasis of calmness ,in the middle of a modern housing development...

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Posted - 25/06/2017 :  19:39:24  Show Profile  Visit janhedger's Homepage  Send janhedger an AOL message Send janhedger a Private Message  Reply with Quote
How nice to feel I have helped you to research and learn and thanks for your comment and the feel of the bluebells - a poetic comment from youself.

Jan

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PS Hope you okay yourself - met Mac on Thursday and he sends his best to all

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