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Posted - 01/12/2018 :  11:52:34  Show Profile Send sherlock a Private Message  Reply with Quote
The door was not impressive or intimidating. One panel showed signs of being kicked. The board was bruised and slightly splintered, but still appeared intact.
I pressed the doorbell, hoping that there might not be anyone to answer. Eventually the heavy door was opened by a tall elegant woman who asked in clipped english, "May I help you ?"
My heart sank, the need to run growing quickly in my now churning stomach.
" I'm here to for the dentist, Mr. Bright." I stammered
"Come in. " she said, and I knew - there was no going back !

Peter Southern

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Posted - 01/01/2019 :  05:49:36  Show Profile  Visit Peter Southern's Homepage Send Peter Southern a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Great Don. You carried me right up till the end :)


Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away
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