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janhedger
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Posted - 27/06/2017 :  17:26:49  Show Profile  Visit janhedger's Homepage  Send janhedger an AOL message Send janhedger a Private Message  Reply with Quote
http://www.forcespoetry.com/poemdetails.asp?ID=5222

Beautiful rhythm and line rhyme like the waves of the ocean that carried the Titanic herself.

Two opening lines draw you right in to the image of the poem.

Jan

We cannot stop, because if a single one of these men were taken and shot, that would be our fault - Edith Cavell
http://www.janscreativewriting.co.uk/ -updated Aug 17 - with new poems/photo's - video interviews - see PowerPoint slide shows, audio files & my books.

Rob Carson
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carlisle
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Posted - 28/06/2017 :  13:22:02  Show Profile Send Rob Carson a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Thank you, Jan, for commenting on my poem 'On Farlam Church' -which was, as ever, insightful and encouraging...
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