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Rob Carson
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carlisle
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Posted - 11/07/2017 :  13:06:19  Show Profile Send Rob Carson a Private Message  Reply with Quote
This poem struck me as being more than purely valedictory. 'The Ending' holds the optimistic promise of renewal too which means it doesn't dwell on that sombre pessimism which impending death can elicit. Written with an engaging clarity and a keen frankness 'The Ending' is a catching and beautifully realised poem...

Patricia Sennett.
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Whittlesey Peterborough
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Posted - 26/07/2017 :  12:08:55  Show Profile Send Patricia Sennett. a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Thank you Rob for your lovely comment on my poem, much appreciated.

Patricia Sennett
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janhedger
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Posted - 26/07/2017 :  14:24:38  Show Profile  Visit janhedger's Homepage  Send janhedger an AOL message Send janhedger a Private Message  Reply with Quote
http://www.forcespoetry.com/poemdetails.asp?ID=5225

A goodbye with optimism - Jan

We cannot stop, because if a single one of these men were taken and shot, that would be our fault - Edith Cavell
http://www.janscreativewriting.co.uk/ -updated Aug 17 - with new poems/photo's - video interviews - see PowerPoint slide shows, audio files & my books.
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