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Rob Carson
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carlisle
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Posted - 20/07/2017 :  12:48:18  Show Profile Send Rob Carson a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Enjoyed the echoic effect of Chiff-, the Robin's trill, cyclists filter....whisper away, all which, with a clarity of description, captured the mood of the moment.
Foxgloves, cups deep with nectar...ambrosia, the food of the God's came to mind. Moist green, softness of tread were, I thought, evocative and engaging.
Your poems have an improving, informative quality, Jan...

janhedger
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Posted - 20/07/2017 :  14:16:38  Show Profile  Visit janhedger's Homepage  Send janhedger an AOL message Send janhedger a Private Message  Reply with Quote
http://www.forcespoetry.com/poemdetails.asp?ID=5228

Oh bless you not only commenting but for picking out significant words/phrases that touched you.

Thank you - I am moved and touched.

Jan

We cannot stop, because if a single one of these men were taken and shot, that would be our fault - Edith Cavell
http://www.janscreativewriting.co.uk/ -updated Aug 17 - with new poems/photo's - video interviews - see PowerPoint slide shows, audio files & my books.
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