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sherlock
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Posted - 04/11/2018 :  16:24:59  Show Profile Send sherlock a Private Message  Reply with Quote
FADING BLOOM

The petal fell silently from the flower, its journey to the floor interrupted by the swing and sway of the draught from the open back door. Yesterday it had been part of a bloom that had filled the kitchen with a wonderful scent as it stood proud and erect in the plain glass vase on the old dresser. Now its colour was faded and the aroma waning.
Was it really only five days ago that she had received the bouquet from friends and colleagues at work? Her retirement had arrived so quickly. Those days of work, fun and companionship were gone and she felt old and useless, her life empty and destined to drift and fall like the petal she had watched earlier.
Alone in the house, she felt that she would not be able to bloom and blossom again.
As more petals fell, she turned her wheel-chair and went out into the garden, for one last look.

Don Holmes

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Posted - 06/11/2018 :  14:57:22  Show Profile  Visit janhedger's Homepage  Send janhedger an AOL message Send janhedger a Private Message  Reply with Quote
So good indeed to see this site being posted on again and with such a poignant yet beautiful - tinged with sadness piece of Flash Fiction - I so adore it.

Thanks Don

Jan

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sherlock
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nottingham
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Posted - 07/11/2018 :  15:13:12  Show Profile Send sherlock a Private Message  Reply with Quote
Hi Jan. I saw that no-one had posted for a long time and this piece had recently come into my mind. I wasn't sure it would be suitable but I'm glad you like it. Regards Don.
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